All Comments on 'Deep Inside I'm Smiling'

I think I met you or maybe just a kindred spirit! Diane or Teri lost her cherry and just kept going until she ran out of petrol! Great story, JJ. Five stars.

I love this. Truly one of the best pieces of erotica that I've read in a while. Thank you for sharing your writing talents.

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The woman has no motivation nor recognizable character traits. If you want to properly write you must include something for the reader to identify with. You gave nothing.

Not up to your usual standards

Not really arousing but so true! So similar to how I feel (except I am atheist now). Well written!

This story is about me. I find that when I write real stories I always get negative feedback but luckily, idgaf. It's been a while since I've done a story that wasn't a request from a follower and it feels good. This is also not really a story. It's more of a stream of consciousness short prose type of poem but Lit won't let me put this in poetry. I tend to write in that netherworld between poetry and prose quite often. I love this "story" so much. Sorry if you don't like it. *shrugs* I'm gonna write tons more like this because I find it so satisfying to write. People can either read them or not. Doesn't matter to me, but I do appreciate the constructive feedback. I really do.

You and I are the same breed, for sure. I loved reading your thoughts articulated vividly as I have those same musings...

I liked it.

Sexual nihilism at its best. You need constant attention because, at heart, you are an empty vessel, confusing pathos with depth...

This goes along with what i said about portrait of a slut 2 .I've always been fascinated by women who just love sex and have enough balls to live there life dismissing all of these fucked up rules and double standards about what one should and should not do. most people are so conformed into someone else bullshit that they don't know how to live and criticize the ones that do.5 stars all day every day