All Comments on 'Deepening Friendship'

great beginning, and middle, but the end left a little something to be desired...what happens after high school? will there be a second part?

Its like i could really feel how they did. It was filled with so much detail. Proper grammar too. Almost jizzed everywhere. But i wasnt hard enough(First story i read of the night)

What? They've had sex but they need practice in kissing?

Having them as virgins would have been better.