All Comments on 'Deepest Desires'

You trail that coat very well.

It's lucid and intelligent.

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Very good first effort. I enjoyed it. I love how fast-paced it is. I like ‘em short & sweet and “Deepest Desires” is a great length. You also have an obvious talent for turning a phrase. “...glazing my bare lips.” is beautiful.

Love the build up - please keep writing!

Do great!!! I neec a part 2!! Please

I'm here stroking away looking for my own cum and it ends. WTF.

Thanks everyone for your comments. It's been a great confidence booster, ill start the follow up tonight so just be prepared it may take a few days to get here. Follow me to easily see when i post new stories. Ive already got another new one too, its called "Seducing My Boss". Id love to hear what you think of it

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What a sensational build up and then leave us all hanging (and drooling). Please come back with more!

I definitely need a second helping of Alyssa and Mason. Great start.

Just read this--great work! Love the rhythm and natural flow; hard to do in an introductory part. Eager to see your style, once we're into the thick of the story. Please keep going!