All Comments on 'Defiled Ch. 01: Endless Worship'

Well written but poorly conceived. How could a church like this exist? A church can only exist by virtue of it's membership and involvement in the community. If the demon only had 5 slaves her rulership over the church would be known to other involved members and it could never be so clandestine. If the church started originally normal then the takeover would be noticed. The only possible way that this could happen is if the demon started her coven and then later put up the pretense of a church, but why? There's no way that everyone outside could avoid noticing the corruption or else the novelty of the church. I'm convinced that the author has never really been involved in a church, but has flirted with the idea of organized religion and finds its corruption taboo and therefore erotic.

I love the story and I'm not to worried about the plausibility of any of it please write more so much more!

Great story please write more. The plot is well thought out and perfectly timed.