All Comments on 'Deflowered Rosa'

I liked this. Especially the twist at the end...

This is fantastic. Your characters, your language, your plot lines, all reek and smack of pungent sex. So SO good!!! You are an original writer - you make it all real and immediate. Great stuff!

Wow, CALIÉNTE!!

Five stars and this story is now in my favorites too! I would love to know what it feels like to go out dressed as a girl and have guys hit on me! Nick for instance, saw "Rosa," or who he really was, and knew what "keys to push," as you wrote. The kissing was the right first step! I've always melted when a man kissed me! I'd be happy Nick wanted to see me again too! I'd be a little angry at Nick, and upset with myself when Nick's friends walked in on Nick fucking me! Nick didn't get off her when they showed up! I would wonder if Nick set me up, as he didn't seem upset with his friends for interrupting! Still, the thought of being used by 3 guys is so HOT !