by Otzchiim
A very good concept - one I had not met before, in that the seduction was drawn out and not just "intercourse within 20 minutes". That, in itself, made the eventual "bonding because of love" possible, because of the time spent together and in increasing intimacy. The ending was superb - the writer being cornered by her feelings, his own feelings, her actions and his accident-caused loss of memory. It is probably the most enjoyable story I have read in the "Mind Control" section.
What a good combination of sentiment and sexuality. I loved the slow movement from plotting to practice and then to commitment. A good story nicely constructed and sounds almost real. Thank you.