All Comments on 'Deidre's Faerie Tale'

You have a very good handle on the plot and character development. You're doing a great job so please continue and update soon :)

I am going to enjoy this one! Keep up the good work

This is a nice, too short story that sets the stage for further chapters. I hope that you plan on continuing.

You are on a roll here. I do enjoy your work. Keep going you have a long term fan of your stories here.

This a great story! the Vacuum reminded me of Dyson overpriced cheap crap LOL fit the description to a tee and what had me rolling:

"Of course she would think that, I fumed, the woman was twice divorced and came to work with cat hair all over her clothes."

The cat lady boss LOL

I thought it was a good story. But did anyone else think the main character was man at first? Good beginning, continue.

Your story seems very interesting. Looking forward to reading.

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