All Comments on 'Deidre's Faerie Tale'

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DMMWolfDMMWolfover 10 years ago
ok that is just creepy

I went to a Polk Elementary when I was a kid...

flgurleygrlflgurleygrlover 13 years ago
good read

Your story seems very interesting. Looking forward to reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

I thought it was a good story. But did anyone else think the main character was man at first? Good beginning, continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Story!

This a great story! the Vacuum reminded me of Dyson overpriced cheap crap LOL fit the description to a tee and what had me rolling:

"Of course she would think that, I fumed, the woman was twice divorced and came to work with cat hair all over her clothes."

The cat lady boss LOL

Nala6Nala6over 16 years ago
Oh Boy

You are on a roll here. I do enjoy your work. Keep going you have a long term fan of your stories here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I hope that you are planning to continue

This is a nice, too short story that sets the stage for further chapters. I hope that you plan on continuing.

A_DDA_DDover 16 years ago
Awesome

I am going to enjoy this one! Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great Chapter!!

You have a very good handle on the plot and character development. You're doing a great job so please continue and update soon :)

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