All Comments on 'Delayed Exposure'

I loved reading this.

Thank you

Nicely done. 5 and a follow.

Excellent first story, drawing it out so that the sexual tension between the two of them kept building made it very readable!

lovely story

An incredibly well written romantic/sexy little story!!! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!

5+

Well written, romantic and erotic, with a hint of mystery and naïvety. Nicely done.

That was an amazing story, thank you so much for posting. I love how it was drawn out, and not just straight to sex.

The talent is strong in this one!

Excellent story by someone who clearly knows their way around a camera! I'd love to read mum and Hank's story too.

For a first time story, this is excellent! It's great how you incorporated your knowledge of Photography to make it more real.