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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Now that....

was funny.

TheKrrakTheKrrakabout 4 years ago
Damn

That actually made me laugh out loud and almost snort coffee out my nose.

5/5 for the reveal alone... awesome job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
oh hello!

Oh wow!

That must becoming a more common and common experience.

The most rugged and accepting of manly men are so accepting for a reason. .

There is something they admire and that admiration, understanding and affection is because they not only want to be with you,,,,

They want to be like you!

Be like you in the most impossible of ways.

I know, I want to be like you .....

Fetishist? Chaser? Admirer?

I dont know if its one size fits all or is right or wrong?

Hope not to disapoint. TRUE MANHOOD IS CONFLICTED!

FirstBorn374FirstBorn374about 4 years ago
You!

should be spanked for not making it to your own challenge.

Great silly little story. Do some more.

Jedd Clampett (carvohi)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
That is good

Great lead up, damn I thought marriage, and now another wanna be. Very good

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 4 years ago
Very cute!

Enjoyed the story, the style and the twist. Please write more.

xoxo,

Di

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110about 4 years ago
Can you say whiplash?

Loving your studly man and finding out he is a girlie boi just like you? What a hoot!

I loved it. Thanks.

bhojobhojoabout 3 years ago

Equally placeable in humour and satire as transgender. Fantastic short!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Why do all authors here and on other sites always assume that ALL CDs/TVs/TSs are homosexual ?

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Still laughing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

A hoot? Hilarious? I despair. I really do. A story about someone's hopes and dreams going down the toilet and people comment about it being funny. Oh just grow up! Thanks for the story even if it was just really sad. Again well written thanks for sharing. BardnotBard.

VerbalAbuseVerbalAbuse3 months ago

Yup, this is about right. You give it as it is.

lovecraft68lovecraft683 months ago

Good work, very poignant. I see some mixed comments, but I'm going to go with this struck me as sad. Maybe the intent was for it to be funny, but I felt the "joke" is the type life often plays on people, and they're rarely funny.

Good job made me feel as well as think.

Sammael BardSammael Bard3 months ago

A great short story. TG/C isn't my cup of tea but still read this story out of curiosity. The ironic twist in the end sealed the deal. Very well-written.

5⭐ for your effort

fredbrownfredbrown2 months ago

Ah, the hopes, the dreams, the best of plans and - surprise honey !! what the fuck!

Now he knows how dear old dad feels .......

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