All Comments on 'Deliverance Ch. 01'

I really enjoy your writing style and would love to read more.

Your story was mentioned in the New Story Review thread found on Literotica's Bullitin Board in the Author's Hangout forum. ~ Red

A nice beginning to what I hope will be a longer story. I love the tone. He's tender and loving - qualities not seen too often in this category. Keep it up!

well written and very down to earth without the normal bdsm false bullshit thrown around quite often...this could be a normal relationship within the l/s and sounds like a very very good healthy one. got to say...im am jealous lol...keep up the great work...you got something here. respectfully fan in Texas naynay