All Comments on 'Deliveries'

What? No rape tag? Ashson always rapes someone. One star for Ashson, the rapist.

Deliveries down under sound like a lot of fun! I wonder what the prescription medicine was? 5*

Loved the reference to 'Derek & Clive'...

Acheson - short and sweet, and funny... Love most of your stores so, keep up the good work,,,

LR

meh - surprisingly average for your writing ability...3*

Yeah happened all the time when I was collecting for my paper route. 🙄

Sort of stupid, regardless of the tips he got.

Yet another rape from the usual suspect, plus he had to make them both cheating whores to boot.

This needs to have a reorderan second delivery

How is it in loving wives except that the two women had their husband's. No mention of their relationship with their husband's. Or any interaction between the boy and the husband's. Just 2 female 1 delivery boy situation. Even the item to be delivered is not integrated in the story.

Erotic Couplings would be a more fitting category for this vignette.

If I only could have been so lucky.