All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 08'

by Xantu

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faq52faq52over 15 years ago
I love your imagination!

you have created a facinating world and characters that are blossoming.

outstanding editing too!

Philip

DragonDreamerDragonDreamerover 15 years ago
Getting Better and Better!

Just when I was worried that ths story might also be winding down, you give it a new twist and a fascinating new character. I really enjoy your writing, in particular your sensitivity. Thanks so much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I'd be willing to bet...

The only raving trolls this author gets are the readers who wish she'd write faster. Keep up the good work... and where the hell is chapter 9?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Dry opinion

The story is very well written. Logic, attention to details, good spirit and tenderness are the strong sides. On the other hand the story is slow, uneventful and not very sexy. That's my final comment, because I won't read the rest. Thanks to the author for inspiration.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
dry opinions rain

THIS IS AWSOME also, neeka ( however u spell it) sounds like nigga

idk if it was intended but I find it funny, yea I'm black deal with it

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
doubtful

Something tells me I will be hearing from dry opinion again.

P.S. liking the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You could write a book

The world you created feels real, you’re story lives. It is beautiful, thank you for sharing this with us.

Anonymous
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