by XvestaniaX
Greatly narrated, No words, it just filled my heart with content.... I felt it happened in front my eyes or dream.... Expecting more as such from you.... The writer 😀
You should really write more stories like this. No matter what anybody says you should keep writing
This is . . . well . . . cold. Some of your sentences are uncomfortably odd; and it all felt like I was watching a bad movie. It had the same vibe as a 13 year old's bad fanfiction about Twilight. You have good ideas, but you lack some skills. Keep writing.
I love Demon stories, loved how they met and how the characters ended up together. Great story.
NEEDS CHECKING FOR SPELLING , AND FORM , LOOKS LIKE THIS COULD EVOLVE INTO A SERIES
Good but you needed some editing help - a few grammer, spelling, word choice issues.