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All Comments on 'Demon's Heir'

by LilyRae88

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice job

I’d really like a second chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More Please

I agree, I would like him to stick around and they have more adventures.

tattooed_cowgirl15tattooed_cowgirl15over 4 years ago
Has potential.

I liked reading this as its intriguing. More detail and some background on Callie and the demon would be nice but great start so far as I'm creaming my panties

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Excellent beginning for a first story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too much to enjoy

I would love to read a second part of it. Loved every words of it. Thank you for writing this

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just one question.

Do you plan to continue this story?

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago
Nice story

Well done.

Just a suggestion, proof read to pick up the little word mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please continue

Loved this story. It has the potential for romance and love as well.

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Just a horny young Canadian with many kinks! I love roleplay especially. No incest or humiliation. If you have an interesting role shoot me a message and we'll see. My kinks include BDSM, petplay, impregnation, situations with a lot of cum, aliens and monsters! Another thing I...