All Comments on 'Demonthorn Ch. 16'

Hi everyone!

This is the author here, just letting you know Chapter 17 is in its final draft phase and should be posted in a week or so.

Also looking for feedback on all the chapters. Please post on what I can improve upon, what you want to see and what worked for you. Go ahead and post on the chapter you want to comment on and I will respond when I see them.

I love writing this story and the fact that the whole book has over 90,000 views just blows me away! Thank you all so much!

Ghostmambo