All Comments on 'Den of Iniquity Ch. 06'

Thank you so much for this story.

Steve

Beautifully written...enthralling...perfectly lovely.

an amazing story that intructs as well..thank You

very nice... and educational to boot.

Sir Nathan,

I have so looked forward to this latest chapter and you didn't disappoint me. The discipline part wasn't too extreme and arousing at the same time. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh my! i am in awe of Your prowess with words Sir!

i left a message at the end of chapter one. In it i said i am a slave with masochistic tenedecies - isn't every sub/slave? - i mean to say i am a slave with sadistic tendencies.

Regardless...A friend of mine asked me what i was reading and i described the story as exquisite. It most certainly is! The way the events have unfolded is perfect. i am most certainly wondering what's in the envelope, what Sylvia's connection to Josephine is going to mean and what about the threats to Chantelle?

i do hope that there is more to come!

i am thrilled to have this forum in which to be able to sample your writing. Thank You for the story!

emerald

What a wonderful, well written story. For someone new to this, it was not only erotic but also very informative.....a must read for anyone new to the lifestyle or anyone who who is looking to be entertained and given another one of Sir Nathan's wonderful gifts....thank you

One of the easiest 5's I've given. Outstandingly good.

Sir,

once again....you leave me hungry and excited for more.

i could only wish i were in her place.....i love how you weave in instruction with the story line....

would you please hurry with the next chapter????

Please write more! I'm dying to read more of this story. You're amazing

Your last two chapters were so erotic, please, please, please write more. I'm breathless!!!! I wish I could give you more than 5 :-)

This is by far the best I've read in a very long time. I'm waiting anxiously for more. The characters are vibrant, the plot is engrossing, the exploration of the subject matter is thorough without overwhelming the rest of the story.

Thanks for a fantastic read, and more please!

-- Bitch in Leather & Silk

thank you Sir_Nathan, i read it and than showed it to my husband and we both loved it. In fact it gave us some ideas to try as well.I really liked the clips and chains and how they were used.It took a bit for my husband Master to get them on me correctly but he and we both loved it.The flogging and the crop well we use them and find them very enjoyable.Master Tim (my husband) likes to hear me moan and beg and they for sure make me moan.We are new to this site and find it very exiticing.My Master has me working on some of our adventures so that we can post them here as well. The first one should be here very soon thank you again Sir_Nathan for your stories.

tessia

Sir Nathan, i have truly enjoyed keeping up with this story. It is like sitting back watching Your mind unfold. Great work Sir.

enigma

I wish I could give it '10'!

Powerful writing, not for the squeamish!! Love it!

Sir Nathan,

Good luck on Your nomination! Chapter Six....ooohhhh...la, la!

tulip~`~bloom

this is the best one i've seen yet!

Just telling you...good job.

wow you write so erotic i can imagine all of it wow another great chapter

...you've picked a side of the story that seems to never be told in the first person. Truly brilliant work.

Unf*** believable!!! This is HOT to the highest degree Sir!!! So refreshing to see a story from the first person of a Dom Sir! Roger's character is fun and completely arousing Sir! Amazing!!! Thank You for writing this wonderful story Sir!

lol there's a thermometer to measure how 'hot' the story is. well, you delivered the raunchy. there were 2 grammar errors. is Rachel editing still?

I've never heard a story of this nature, but I like it. Training stories are fun, especially ones that cover respect in the relationship even if it is not a romantic one.

I'm now in a very "warm" place and will need to enjoy it thoroughly. Thank you.

The editor is very good. The story; I was there!

Story is great. Punctuation, not so much. Spell check sometimes fails. But those are just details.

This story was fantastic! Would love to have you write more on it!

Page 3 is the most erotic I have ever read because of the intricate step by step buildup to Josephine's awesome climax - her submission, her obedience, her obvious primal enjoyment. It brings back memories of a special partner alas since lost

I want a master like Roger. Mmm! Someone please come flog me!

I've waited till this far before adding my comments. This story is awesome. I like the build-up, the tension as the hero discovers his true "vocation" as a dominant, the willingness of the subs. It gells together very nicely. Reminds me of how my slave gelled into my lifestyle. Think I'll go & flog her now.

I loved that it was so extremely hot. But within it was a lot of built up suspence with silvia! And the ending where josaphine was her sister! WOW

Welll if that didn't warm me right up, SN. The 3rd page... Roger falling masterfully into his Dom role... Beautiful warmed skin. Magnificent....

-a

Oh..my...gosh...I HAVE to get a set of those clamps!!!

*swoon*

Absolutely loved it, Sir_Nathan.

I actually jumped up and gasped at the end of that. Damn! You're writing is absolutely amazing. I can't think of a single complaint. I'm eager to keep reading, but I think I'll hold off until tomorrow because I don't want it to be over yet. Thank you for sharing your work. :)

Really excellent writing! Good twist with her sister. Wish you would write more.

I really enjoyed the story and how you described it but Josephine says sir every single time she opens her mouth. I started just skipping the word

...that was so hot...

I liked the story it was riveting and the ending was unexpected but altogether well done and beautiful

incredibly descriptive...you are an artist extraordinaire. These passages are the finest

renditions of insight into the female response.

Your descriptions of female sexuality are amazing. I love the hook at the end of the chapter. Perfect story telling ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

What a twist at the end!!!!