All Comments on 'Denial and Overstimulation'

Your story feels a little over-the-top what all the "goodies" you crammed into it. You would do better to put aside some of the hardware, slow the pace down, and linger in the moment. Show us what you are feeling rather than telling us about it. This would let readers better feel your frustration at being denied orgasms.

Also, on a BDSM safety note, wearing tight nipple clamps for five hours is a no-no.

All that said, Cleo, you write fairly well. As for whether you continue with a second part, this should be strictly up to you and your muse.

I look forward to your next story. Five stars

We need many more like this maybe bring chastity belt into play

i love this sm i agree with the past comment i would love to see a chastity belt come into play and more pussy/clit spanking

I think this story has a lot of potential, but as a previous comment said, it could use more in-depth descriptions and lingering moments, or showing rather than telling. Overall, it has a lot of interesting points and I’d love to read more.

Nice. It reminds me how after a long period of teasing and not cumming just edging through nipple and clit play, i am released, in front of my man's friends, without penetration of course. Its the best feeling ever.

Thank you I quite enjoyed this

Please keep writing I loved it ❤️