All Comments on 'Deployment Correspondence Pt. 01'

That is seriously fucked up.

I do not understand why this only got one comment and it was a 5 word sniper swipe. Maybe it is because of the letters and transcripts section which I have never read before. (I say in on your own stories list and I have followed you.)

Anyway, it is a nice story of how these lovers are slowly getting more and more adventurous during their separation. It is very well written your work always is. Since it has only been a month perhaps you will do a part 02. If you do please send me a note to give me a heads up. I could see this progressing to the point they are both going all the way with all manner of partners and giving each other all the details. Nicely done.