All Comments on 'Depraved Indifference'

utter filthy garbage

i bet yo momma did let you spooge her cootchie. her daddy prolly did her too and thas how they got you

Never write again.

You are an illiterate loser.

Please stop writing

Spooge and Cootchie? Really?

Your computer. Then your keyboard and THEN...smash each & every finger so you can NEVER write again.

indifferent....no...sadistic...yes,,, TK U MLJ LV NV

Then throw it into the deepest part of a lake. You'll thank me for it one day. Or we'll be thanking you, instead. Either way, don't write anything ever again.

Like ever.

It's like a 15-year-old wrote this without any clue of the female anatomy, and quite honestly, nothing, ZERO, ZILCH, was interesting about this story. I hope you never write again.

For all of the people who complain about a story on this site I give exactly no fucks. Personally I like this story and will hope to see a part 2 to it. Just like with some of your other stories, waiting for a part 2-?

Take care and do what you love.

this shit was fucked up and it was hot. i love dialogue and dirty talk, especially when its kept in character like this was. involved all the best things about a story, and got right to the point.

to the author: keep it up, i'd love to see more of this.

to the other commenters: i don't know who the hell you think you are are, but like most others, i'm here to get off on these stories, not give out a pulitzer or discuss "female anatomy". if you get off on grammar, or think there are certain words that are not appropriate for literotica or there's a right way to write a dirty story then get off this site and read a fucking nora roberts novel or watch a rom-com because you're in the wrong place.

Fucking dreadful. So ham-fisted and unpleasant, it's almost comical.

Hot and depraved! Very nice.