All Comments on 'Desert Diamond'

Excellent read..I hope the story takes on a life of it's own at least for another chapter or two.

So she basically rapes him, nice move, if it was a man doing it to an unconscious woman there'd be hell to pay!

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you.

More please

First aren't most of these stories just fantasy?

I like your writing style,,,,please continue...you have a flair for it.

Enough to ask for a chap 2

Thx

Enticing, and a great foundation for more chapters.

Any chance for a part 2? These two have so much possibilities :)

Well written. You could do a lot of different things now. Great start.

I enjoyed your story a great deal. It's small, with a big heart. Thank you.

but it ended abruptly. and what on earth was the last para about?

Needs to continue

Definitely needs to continue.

It ended so quickly there is potential for more to happen