by moodcouple
Damn! At first I thought my wife had written it.
We did some swinging years ago and have written erotica together too. And, our names in the erotica was Mike and Jan! LOL! And her real name is Carol!
At first I thought it might be her way of saying she's ready to explore, swinging, again with me.
But, as usual, you wrote a very fun story and allowed me to live, vicariously, the things I'd love.
Write on!
or other underaged person wrote this. Just using the fuck many times does not mak for an erotic story. Yours is no different.
I really liked your story. I'm not sure if it would be that easy to arrive at the fact that a neighbor is swinging but tits still a hot story with good characters and most important of all you let me know what was going on inside the characters heads instead of giving a narrative of what happened. Please write more of these two couples!
A good hot story, but it was kinda spoiled for me when Carol's husband started out being Rob and then became Stan.
A good hot story, but it was kinda spoiled for me when Carol's husband started out being Rob and then became Stan.
Don't pay attenion to the nit pickers. My too young gf(38) and I loved it. Maybe someday someone will write a hot story about a short fat balding man getting on with a very hot 38yo.
wow. totally made me *juicy*. please tell me part two is coming soon...
So it was Jan and Carol, and Mike, Rob and Stan... but Rob apparently just watched? He wasn't mentioned in the activities, despite being one of Carol's husbands.
Or did I misunderstand?