All Comments on 'Destined Hearts Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
simply awesome

the best chapter so far...the finale please...

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
HMMMMMMMMM!!!!

wait wait wait wait,lemme read it again

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
i thought.. .

santiago had to flirt with Praveen to make Antonio's love show but look what has happened,😫😫😫😫😫..infact praveen is right,we were defeated already for sure....i mean thats all we had now as treasure u know..fun we might be having Daddy Richard now but remember ts ending soon so ts gonna be brief FUUCKKKK,how r we even going to enjoy this???????,

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
do u remember the unbroken reign?????

do u remember what Luis had to go through to get Aidan back???!!thats what Antonio deserves or even worse infact worse who dares ito insult my Praveen??....soo should we expect Antonio to plead hmm???this chapter cant show it all Van remember ts only one remaing i guess so its gona be brief which we dont want coz we've come too way long waiting just to get this brief Van

😣😣😣😣😣i know u have atrick up ur sleeve but make it good Van please Antonio has to pay 4 sure

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
Daddy Richard......

for sure Van If Praveen is gonna find his dad now then,t cant be short Van.....i just dont want to miss it not to mention Katy's love for praveen,t has just started and then to end!!!!!! no some people have lessons to learn

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
theme song

dont say u love me by fifth Harmony and take a bow by Riri....waiting my Crowned king of writers

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
happy new year

i love u all

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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Am savoring each page and reading it slowly as possible... I cant take another wait. Still I managed to finish before update 🥺.

Only disappointment is, PLEASE proofread at least 10 times before posting, your adding another plot's character name. And my God!! sentence forming is another level. But it's okay..... I love your storytelling. Make it long as possible. I'll still read it.

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