All Comments on 'Detective Story'

I like writing detective stories myself, and I'm looking forward to more of yours.

Wifey suspects you being a man, because of your attitude to doubt a rape because of the woman having an orgasm. There are force orgasms, too.

I enjoyed this one until the last few paragraphs. The ending felt a little flat, although I honestly can't say how I would have improved it. The best part, for me, was the rushed interlude after the interview. It wasn't NonCon or Reluctance; it was just hot. There's nothing I like more than a woman who knows what she wants and isn't afraid to get it. Almost as good was the whole drawn out explanation from the "victim." Overall, this was a very good story, I just wished it ended on a stronger note.

now, i'll read your other one. thanks!