All Comments on 'Devastation Pt. 03'

Loved the whole karmic bit came into play.

Please do it again!!!!! Can't wait for more latex, bondage and suffering. A brilliant story

Part Three of this nightmare saga leads us through the utter and complete transformation of the characters, bound on all levels, unhinged from what and where they were, metamorphosed; perceptive readers of the three sections -- nearly a-hundred-thousand words -- may divine the spot-on ending of the twisty narrative. This is a writer/storyteller with a filthily erotic, deliciously, disgustingly, disturbingly dirty mind and a steep, free-running imagination to match. This website’s not devoted solely to BDSM and some may find this tale beyond their orbit. Of the genre, this story is about as good as it gets. As a debut effort, it’s enormous. One can only hope for more from this radiant source.

i have been a follower of literotica.com from 2002. this is one of the best submissions i have read. Please try to continue with the story........... Hoping the same would come very soon...

Again I have said it this is the best story I have read here!

But then I have always told you that!

READ IT

I kind of wish Sabirah hadn't been betrayed,but it was great,by far the best story I've read on here.

Well done , very good story .

Best story I have read on here too. Congratulations! The Devil...is in THE DETAIL! INCREDIBLE!!!

I am so glad that Sabirah gets what she deserve.

Great story !

The ending was probably the only nice thing about this story. Still dragging on, still too much useless information that digresses from the main story, still too much weird noises.

i think the previous commentator should spend their time reading comic books , or possibly stick with television & film ,

novels & real books are obviously far beyond them.

in paper back this series would run to approx. 340 to 390 pages ..

it's as good or better than many , that i have purchased from silver mink / black lace in the past.

in fact it's so good i have to wonder....

is this the work of a published author ...

xxxhugsxxx

very detailed

a bottom less abyss of the most sadistic tortures on a woman by a psycho!! and happy endings?!;)) no...not here!!! ;))

Truly a masterpiece. Question: How did Stefani reconcile with her mother? Or did I just miss that? Anyway, thank your for writing this epic. SPECTACULAR.