All Comments on 'Devil's Hotline Ch. 02'

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countdowntolov3 3 months ago

Nice job! The Lauren and Emma dynamic is fun. I really enjoyed their banter.

Anonymous3 months ago

There you go. A bit of conflict starting up. And her new friends might not be real friends too. David is in for a big surprise when he finds out his D level target is 4 levels higher than he expects. But does she have defensive powers that react automatically or do they require conscious thought? Keep writing. It's really good.

Anonymous2 months ago

More please! 🙏

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