All Comments on 'Devine Defloration Ch. 01'

Excellent writing! Good English, good narration, and even though this is stated to be fiction, it is not far from the truth during that period in time!

"IT'S GOOD TO BE THE KING!" comes to mind! Chandela kings as well as the kings of some of the other former princely states did engage in similar activities. Part of history of a different era.

i dont have words which i think would be enough, so i an only ask for more.........., like oliver twise??!!! :)

congratulation!!

The King has spoken via a load of his sperm into the lost virginity of the young girl. The virgin bride to be who let down her own liquids after the lund of her lord tore apart her ring of virginity prior to send her off to her husband. Story had some problems in utilizing English as the language, but not enough to give you a five star rating.