All Comments on 'Devoured by Cetus'

Hello,

What a wellwritten story but some alinea's seems to be double and there is a continuency problem with her dress being ripped off.

I think the ending is a bit abrupt. Will there be a part 2?

Like I said in the Author’s Note there may have been some mistakes that I missed one major one is the same paragraph twice on the first page but both are worded differently. I’m so sorry about that.

Oh my goodness that was hot. I could totally handle reading more of this one, Cetus' abilities just have so damn much potential....

You seem to always hint at upcoming anal - but never get there! It’s giving me blue balls! I was so ready to read about her taking his tentacles and cock in her back passage - sad face