All Comments on 'Dex and the Twins at College Ch. 11'

by BigZeke13

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tizwickytizwickyalmost 4 years ago

I'm still waiting for Dex to say to Grace, Sara, and Sandy hey come on over to my house I want to introduce you to my Mom, Dan Julie and June. Seriously now why can't that just happen.

Rancher46Rancher46almost 4 years ago
Where's Reece and Sylvia

There is mention of a conversation between Dex's mother and Sylvia that is never finished?? Whats up with that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Narrator Shift

Bold move after so long of sticking just with Dex's perspective. Hopefully it proved you could open the story up for the other characters. Jack seemed like he would not have settled for anything less than full access. What could he do with his wealth to acheive that. And how long till Linda is persuaded to bring Molly along to help with landing sales. Nice gear change with Grace, really added to the story.Hopefully she doesn't get too comfortable too quick with this new dynamic of her and her twins, naturally Dex his very helpful.

Thanks for giving us another 5 star chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Need Character Depth

You write excellent scenes but a glimpse of what goes inside hearts of characters is needed. I mean its been so long but still Dex is like a sex toy who does what ever female asks him to, just a walking dick, never trying to put his priorities first in front of females. Then there comes the twins, there is no foreshadowing towards where they will ultimately end up, though considering the chemistry you have shown between Dex and them it seems they will end up together and frankly it kind of fits, but a little hint would definitely help. Considering the fact that this story has gone for so long a little twist emotional side with Dex cutting down sex and showing some "maturity" would be a welcome change

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
dad

i thought dex dad did not like anal when did that change?

BigZeke13BigZeke13almost 4 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous - DAD

To the anonymous person asking when Dad became interested in anal sex. Try reading Chapter 9. Dr. Jaffrey makes a house call to use hypnosis on Dad's aversion to cunnilingus and anal.

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