All Comments on 'Dexter the Personal Trainer Ch. 03'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 4 years ago

Loved it! I hope that mom catches him and Becky in the next chapter and then joins in! Five stars and a favorite point!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice

Do mom and sis together now. Teach them all about the art of eating pussy. He kinda is in charge now, so they'll go along with what he says.

eodomeodomabout 4 years ago
Interesting concept

I read the first. Halter when you first uploaded it but missed #2. Just read 2&3 together and really like the plot. Keep up the story line and yes let’s get mom and daughter together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Very good. Please continue writing.

sp9983sp9983about 4 years ago
Next steps

Mother catches the two "working out", joins in. Next, the aunt comes over to "workout" and all join in the fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Yes, let the mother catch them, and join them. Later, the aunt as well.

But, please spread the plot development over a few chapters (or more). It's ok to have a fast plot, but don't go too fast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Inconsistent

Hot as usual, just have a small issue. In previous chapter mother was standing in doorway watching her sister get fucked, even gave him a good job sign, and yet in this one she asks her son what happened as if she forgot. Always the little things that get you. 5* Obviously

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Awesome but I'm disappointed

Half way through I lost track of which chapter this was, thinking it was the second chapter, with a third one to look forward to. Imagine my disappointment when I got to the end, only to realize that it truly was the end.

How about writing a fourth chapter, just to ease my disappointment.....

Taste4UrLustTaste4UrLustalmost 4 years ago
Loved it

I just finished reading this series and loved it. I found his moving through the family to be very stimulating, but it seems that there much is left hanging. I would like to hear more... thanks 5*

LaphroaigLaphroaigalmost 4 years ago
3 some

What about a little diversion from the family to a 3some with Mildred and George. Perhaps having Uncle watch while Dexter fucks his Aunt. Mother watching as Becky is fucked by her brother.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please

More chapters in the story would be good

sucksexfulsucksexfulover 2 years ago

Yum! Leftovers!! 😈😂

weirdorcrazyweirdorcrazyabout 2 years ago

there definitely needs to be another chapter

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

That 'leftover' got me laughing like a mad man. Great series.

You should continue with the stories.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf5714 days ago

Since you're still publishing on Literotica, was wondering if you have any plans on putting out more chapters with Dexter the personal trainer?

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