All Comments on 'Diagnosing a Fetish Ch. 02'

You’ve fallen off badly. This is straight up garbage.

A great new story in the making again! I absolutely loved that part where she watch what was on that memory key. She obviously found one amazingly perverted therapist! :-)

And to the Anonymous who commented before me... Shut up please...

I rarely bother to comment.... but I can't let the only comment so far be a bad one.... you're going somewhere with this and I'm going to be along for the ride.... You don't need my approval, but you have it.

Excellent stuff once again! Mallory took a big step, but she's still got a long way to go. :)

The dream sequence was actually my favorite part; very sensual, but I liked the absurd ending and scene where she woke up afterwards. It was jarring (in a good way!) like a real dream would be. Well done!

Also came here for to say that first comment sucks. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. I'd love to see some pants mess if she gets too in the moment with her impulses!

This looks promising. Im very interested to see where this goes. Especially like the dream sequence.

I'm so glad you're back in action! I'm really digging the different vibe of this story, and the main character's hang-ups I think are really relatable. I remember feeling that way early on when I was much younger. I'd come and then be instantly ashamed. I can't wait to see where you go with this one. I've been reading scat erotica online for 25 years, and you are in my top 3 all-time favorite writers, and easily the best that is actively writing. Thanks for sharing your work with us!

A powerful continuation that pulls no punches and goes right to the core of the human soul's dark side. Cogratulations on writing such a fascinatingly disturbing story.