All Comments on 'Diana in the Offing Ch. 03'

Thank you so much Mama S - well worth waiting for xxxxx

Thank you, Pixie; working with you is always a delight and an honor. Thank you for allowing me to share this effort. I look forward to when Lady Cynthia takes what is hers; it will undoubtedly be an adventure for all.

Kisses, and again, thank you. xoxoxo

Everything makes so much sense after reading this chapter. - And everything has so much more meaning as well. I already was invested in all the characters, but now that investment has deepened exponentially. I am actually terrified and preemptively heartbroken for Charlotte, and Emily’s other special girls; knowing that Emily is not long for this world. - I am heartened and comforted though, by the fact that Emily has brought so many incredible women together and fostered an amazing environment of empowerment, love, sexual expression, and sisterhood. The backdrop of WWI and the Spanish flu lends additional gravity and gravitas to the challenges, sacrifices, and triumphs in the ladies’ lives. Incredibly well done SerradaC!!! 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

For a chapter with virtually no mention of sexual activity, this was an example of writing at the highest level. You apologised in your introduction for the length of time it took this chapter to emerge. It was well worth the wait! Your character development is excellent, and this chapter seems to have set Charlotte/Diana up for more adventures and exploration of the fetish scene she has been introduced into by Emily. (I hope she survives, by the way. All would be Dominatrixes require a mentor!) Beautifully written SerradaC. 5 very well deserved stars.

Thank you Olwen and Anon, your praise humbles me. Thank you both. I hope you like the next chapter as much. XXXX