by LiminallySpaced
Great work! You manage to communicate your characters' feelings so well, I end up empathetic to Tim's situations. No other authors' series have made my stomach drop or heart flutter as this one, looking forward to more!
Upon reread, and I'm assuming this happens later on in the series, the Tim/Steph/Sara threesome is gonna be wild! And can't wait to meet Mandy again!
So many girls and so much fun to be had. Why stick with Steph? Cut it loose, dude. And visit Tara, for crying out loud. She's the special one.