by alexmuntz109
Great story, keep it up! As I was reading this I was thinking how I too would love to be Sam’s maid. I like the dynamic between the characters. I got very hard from reading this. I look forward to chapter 2!
Good, had potential to be great. Needed more bulk, more build up and enhancement. Some would call it filler. The relationship needed to breathe and grow. I really got into it and this is why I suggested more be added. Chapter two would take care of it. What if he is in a frat and moves him into his frat room with him. The frat brothers allowed use of him one weekend a month would be a nice touch. Just more that would allow the relationship to grow.