All Comments on 'Didn't Go Like I Planned'

What an absolute load of badly written garbage!

You really need an editor.

thats the stupidest story on here so far bar none you little sissy

Yuk!

Wow that was fucked up. 1☆

If you're playing 'Cuckold Bingo' while reading this story, you'll win without a doubt...

And all this for what? Since sex SUPPOSEDLY wasn't one of their problems, did this gangbang fixed anything? Of course not.

All of this nonsense... yet they're still going to end up divorce. Hey, best outcome possible for everyone here.

Ultimately, the only losers are... the readers of this flash.

English a 2nd or 3rd language?

Dumber than a stump and so badly written as to be barely legible.

If only you were smart enough to find the fetish category for your Fetish story...

Who knows, then you might also be able to not only write a story better, but write a better story!

Not the best.

Wiping the "comb"... lmfao

Not normally into cuckhold stories but this was a little better than most.

Typos and gramatical errors i can deal with. English isnt everyones first language. But this story just describes a video on xhamster titled "3 guys met in a bar take my cuckold wife" . Nice try passing it off as your own original ideas though.

That is really fucked up!

Lots of spelling mistakes which took away from your story. 3 guys show up and she just gets up and goes with them? She takes dope without a second thought? And she preferred the BBC most of all? Again a racial story in the wrong category and everyone is expected to believe that the BBC is the only way to go?

A very weak effort. one star

This tale "didn't go like I planned", looking at the very low readers rating: 2.4*. Same negative evaluation as the previous tale. Change category to Fetish or Interracial to get better results.

I hate slut wife stories

1 star from me too though I did not read the garbage.

I loved the story. But then I’m no writers critic like the rest lol.

I’d love to be my wife’s good dog too.

Yes you have a good story, but did you ever proof read it? Wrong words, misspelled words all take away from a good story. Why did it take half a story for you to tell us your wife is latino? More base info up front would enhance the story as well. Try harder next time.

The story was difficult to read. I agree with want2be845 comments