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by Kinkybottomwhore

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PappasleazePappasleaze4 months ago

yeah this nothing for me . I will let a chapter just scroll on by.

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor4 months ago

Too short, you dont give your reader time to really get into the story. Which equates to making it forgettable. Clearly you want your readers to crave and anticipate your next chapter. But You have to hook them first... making it so short robs you of that possibility. What could have been a great memorable story ends up being almost cliche and forgetable. 3 stars

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I enjoyed the story very much.

I look forward to the next chapter

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FTM slut who enjoys writing erotica. I'm not here to write love stories. I'm here for the naughtiest sexual fantasies that come to my mind. My deepest desires fleshed out through story. I also take requests. No charge, I just love writing and always appreciate new ideas. I al...