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All Comments on 'Direct Insemination'

by Howag

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Interesting premise.

But too mechanical. Too automatic. Too fast.

And it becomes rape. Bleccch.

Nothing about story is erotic at all.

Two stars.

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

Interesting, but needs to be fleshed out.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

Short story that was too short! Why?

Thanks for sharing your work!

harry_saffronharry_saffronalmost 2 years ago

5 stars. Great idea, short & sweet development

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