All Comments on 'Dirty Running'

Finish the story off please!

Loved your previous stories and can't wait for the next instalment of this one!

It's me Katrina, the unapologetic lesbian! - Everyone of your stories gets better than the last, if you keep writing stories like this, there's going to be a lot of women having orgasms all over the world.

(I give this story 5-stars all the way.)

I think you know that I'm a twisted dyke with a taste for kinky lesbian sex, and especially scat and pee play.

I'm so looking forward to reading chapter 2...

Thank You..

(P.S.) Does my vote count, even if I'm not a member, anyone know??

Gay Kat.

I did wonder if you might like this story, Kat! :-) I don't know if your vote counts but you should sign up to Lit anyway, especially if you want to Favourite stories or get feedback to your comments.

Sorry for all those who felt the story incomplete. To be honest, I was feeling a bit bashful about posting the story at all (scat isn't appreciated by a lot of peple) and I wimped out of following the girls to the bathroom. Will you all forgive me if I write part two?

Sue

Hey Sue,

please start writing part two. Your Story brilliant and I

am so looking forward to the "dirty" part. Thanks for

sharing your fantasies with us !

This is a first me reading about people getting off by shitting on themselves and rubbing it all over their bodies. I was always taught to wipe my vaginal area from front to back to avoid infection from feces. So not only was my face scrunch up as I held my breath, (a tribute to the descriptive writing of the author) I was disgusted and audibly cried out, "uggh, that's nasty - infection city," when Emm put shitty fingers inside her. However, despite my repulsion I'm glad I continued to read cause the story had a happy ending and I learned once again, it takes all kinds of people to make the world go 'round. 

If you'd let me know your email I'd love to discuss your comment further.

Sue

x

would love to read more,found it exciting..just wish more people would not be so afraid to share there storys,anyone got tips to finding stories about old woman scat stories,,from a loving Irishman,,xxxxxx

You really capture the true intimacy and hotness of scat (as I think about it anyway :D). So many stories are about degradation and meanness but this is just beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing and I hope to read more soon!

It would be wonderful to see you tackle an FFM threesome...although I understand that may not be your thing ^_^

Sooo good please wright more of this

Such a hot and erotic story about such an intimate event. It is so exciting when the play is done sensual and not degrading. I would love to hear more..... please!

What a hot and nasty story! Me and the wife enjoyed reading it. Waiting eagerly to read what happens in the bathroom. :-) . With all the nasty and dirty details please. ;-)

I also enjoyed reading the following authors (sadly most have stopped writing)

Laurie (bi) http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=31501&page=submissions

Milene (lez)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=238894&page=submissions

Sam Cornell (lez)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=401236&page=submissions http://www.asstr.org/~samcornell/stories.html

http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/samcornell/

Katherine_T (lez)

http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Katherine_T/

notnice66 (pee, light scat)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=224166&page=submissions

VeryDirtyDenise (lez, pee, scat)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=245273&page=submissions

lilactwist (pee, scat+)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=231439&page=submissions

Scatella2008 (pee, scat)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=946884&page=submissions

anallover69 (pee, scat)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1349603&page=submissions

writerbyheart (pee, scat)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1515490&page=submissions

dirrrtywillow (pee, scat)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=401325&page=submissions

Jackie c (pee, scat)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=29045&page=submissions

ScattySue

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1962666&page=submissions

(xxx)

That is an amazing experience, and you have a wonderful gift for writing.

Such a very hot exciting story keep up the great work look forward to reading more of your stories

Would definitely like to follow them into the bathroom!

I wish if you continue this story

Please, please, please, do a sequel! I'd love to see what these two could get into to!

Please we need a part 2 or 3 even for this.

Yes, definitely needs a part 2, where Helen shits and pisses all over Em, then Em licks Helen clean!

Maybe Helen licks her own shit off Em, DEFINITELY they should share shitty kisses!

Check "Two Girls One Cup"!

It is dirty, and hot, hot, HOT!!

Dirty ..... the key word that piqued my interest. I love all of your stories that I have read, and this too. A brave move into such a kinky genre so I can understand why you might have been bashful. I have a strong leaning into toilet and shit games but have leaned to be cautious about declaring it. Like several others readers, I'd love to read the follow up(s). So please do not be shy

Hallo Sue,

Wow! I just reread "Dirty Running", for the at least fourth time,,, and for a short story, it's really good,,, all it needs is an ending,,, and a girlfriend that's a little more like me, you know considerate,,, a girlfriend that would get in there and clean up that shitty mess for her,,, look she's already feeling bad enough,,, I could help her to relax with a few orgams and a nice long relaxing tongue bath,,, mmmm yes!

Hmm, bashful author? Well love, I'm pretty sure you're over that shy bashfulness by now,,, yes,,, your just about as bashful as I am,,, ;-) !

So I'll say it again,,, I'm so looking forward to reading chapter 2..

5&5 _ 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms..

Your scat loving dirty dyke friend,

Gay Kat.

xx

Until Sue writes the continuation to her hot and dirty story here is a link to a story of what can happen between two kinky friends in the bathroom. I keep imagining the two women are ScattySue and her scat loving dirty dyke friend Kat having some scatty fun.

https://www.literotica.com/s/after-the-dance-class byVeryDirtyDenise

try this link instead ( no space in 'c lass')

https://www.literotica.com/s/after-the-dance-class

byVeryDirtyDenise

after-the-dance-class, not after-the-dan ce-class or after-the-dance-c lass

I can identify with Em in your story -- at least her unexpected delight after her accident. It is more a kind of play I can realistically envision happening, but what I genuinely like about the story is your restraint... I get the feeling you write from experience :)

That was a really nice story!!

Excuse the pun but that was rather a shit ending, are you gonna write a new chapter & let us know if you shit on each other. That i would like 👍

More please don't leave us hanging like that

great description of an accidental shit and the pleasure it provides. liked the new found "love" and leaving the unfinished bathroom scene to our imagination

I like these short and sweet stories sometimes - like "My Perfect Little Sister". The only downside is that, just as I'm starting to get into it and getting to like the characters, the story ends. I'd love for you to revisit some of your shorter stories in the future and continue expanding on them.

I enjoyed this story immensely, and I look forward to sitting down with the rest of your amazing body of erotic works. Well done, Sue!

Karen

Well Love, I'm Still Waiting To Read Chapter-2,,, Yes!

Hallo Sue!

Love, here I am again... we just read "Dirty Running"... for the 5th or 6th time, and for a short story, it's still fucking hot and sexy!

All it needs is an ending, and maybe another character, say someone like me, a piss and shit loving girlfriend that will get right in there and clean up that shitty mess... you know how much I love giving nice long relaxing tongue baths to girls that shit their pants, and definitely a few hot wet orgasms,,, yes!

Thank-You, 5-Stars and 5-Wet Yummy Orgasms..

Your kinky dyke scat loving girlfriends,

The Black Queen and Gay Kat.

xxx

Too short…great story and could be so much more