All Comments on 'Disciples of Caine Ch. 01'

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RonanJWilkerson over 1 year ago

Overalll good story. The mother-daughter bit in the beginning was understandable as a desperate need issue. The continuing mother-daughter sex is somewhat disturbing.

Also, on page 3, when they are at Jesse & Lea's you describe Caine and Melanie having sex but then mention Erin. According to the story, she's in another room getting on with Ana.

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