All Comments on 'Discipline and Punish Pt. 02'

Truly beautiful writing. I forgot you can use the word "genitals" in a sex scene and it can still be hot as hell. You strike a perfect balance between all the elements of this story--physical, psychological, emotional--never getting stuck on any one level. This is really, really good.

A pleasure to read! You’ve captured the era perfectly too.

Honestly it’s one of my most fervent desires that the section of the population described as female finally find the will to live life fully and freely. It’s genuinely depends AF that women are conditioned from infancy on what is appropriate/ safe for women. Everything from clothing, anatomy, education, sex …actually scrap all of that it really is just everything. Not walking alone at night, or anywhere without crowds, not enjoying sex freely - because “good girls don’t……”, not dressing provocatively - because “it’s asking for it “. I’m calling bullshit on all of it, an opinion I formed 30+ years ago. If a man fucks a different woman every other night isn’t a slut, then neither is a woman who does the same. Sorry, it’s a common rant of mine.

Love the story, thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)