by LunaLoon
Should be in BDSM . Nothing erotic about this story at all. Hopefully you will finally add some in the next chapter
BDSM is always consensual. At least it is consensual non-consent. This not NOT consensual. She can’t stop anything. This firmly belongs in the non on category. However I love the possibilities. Since she is 18, she could record this and take a video to the police. She is a spoiled brat, but what he is doing is illegal. We’ll have to see if she takes a video where she tells him no matter what he can’t punish her, and he spanks her anyway.
On the other hand, it could turn into consensual BDSM, and he could fall in love with the person she could be and he could help her become.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Your descriptive writing style really makes the series!
.. just hope You don't run out of energy or ideas. Thank You for posting.
Your writing style makes this story even more rich. The pace is interesting but the story makes it worth the wait.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep writing, this is fiction if the Monday morning quarterbacks want to through a wrench in your program they can go somewhere and read something else. This is NonConsent/Reluctance, she's a brat not a lawyer.
Damn, I don't even know whether he'll even fuck her, though I hope he does, yet I still can't wait for what happens next.
I keep on coming back to this story, I just love it. Please write more and post it soon!! Xoxo
Wonderful writing. I am with everyone else, i can't wait to see where you take this. Not sure where its headed but i would love for him to give her some rough anal as a future punishment. Maybe even a good long figging.