All Comments on 'Diss Functional'

Wonderful start. I can hardly wait to see where this one goes!

What an unusually good story, enjoying it.

Starts offensive, gets downright hot!

I mentioned to you once before that you shared lots of ideas between stories - like Si’s vs bums rush. But this was totally out of left field, new and nuts (except maybe the baby focus lol). Angry wives may be a bit close to home for some of us, but you more than made up for it, great work

Rated as four (4). An abundance of pussy hair, any color but burnt orange, in the niece's pussy description probably would have gotten you a five rating. Otherwise, you have a good story.

This is odd, but I think I like it. It's hard to get a grasp on it, especially Theresa's tourette like spew of abuse constantly. Yet, it seems like she's arranging for her husband the niece to be happy, as bizarre as the setup is.

Enjoying it, wife's reaction is strange still trying to figure that out but she seems to want her husband taken care of and wants the best for the niece, but her motive????

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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.

Very Nice!!!! 5☆

Its hilarious too 5 stars!

Fantastic.

Great story I was thinking the Wife was going to trick them and Forse Devorce. Din not think she go for the new Hoe.

[Anonymous] re: [No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.] Thank you for so perfectly illustrating why so many writers hate this rating system and why some have even stopped writing altogether. Obviously, you've never submitted a story or you'd know that the staff sometimes tweaks the chapter #s. Instead of being an informed reader and noticing the "(1/4)" in the story description -- which tells you that this is part 1 of 4 -- you choose to give me the lowest rating possible -- not based on content -- but on the title/chapter#. Please take the time to look at the author's name before you click on a Literotica story and kindly don't read any more of my pieces. You're more bitter and vindictive than the MC's wife and I don't need that level of hate in my life.

I am left wondering wife's end game, and thinking that her and the niece had already discuss this long before hand. I would have like to see more dialogue between the three and not just sex scene after sex scene. That is what kept if from being a five star for me. 4/5

Very, very good story!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to rest of the chapters!!!!!!

Brilliant, and unique plot! Fantastic writing.

Actual love beyond the immediate sex is always a pleasant surprise in these stories. Unfortunately this is -too- good in its cuckquean angle: guaranteed room and board or not, I cannot fathom how anyone could endure someone like Teresa—I'm the -reader- and I think I took psychological damage just by proximity!

This is a deceptively clever and touching love story masquerading as trailer trash porn. It takes a talented writer to pull this shit off.

On to the next episodes...

Thank you!