All Comments on 'Distractions Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Communication People!

Biggest problem with couples is their lack of communication. You would think these two being best friends wouldn't have those issues and here we are witnessing it. Cassie/Wilson are going to be major obstacles. I await your update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
ugh

I really hate females with Cassie's personality. Not happy unless they make others unhappy and thinking the world is their due. Wilson...just needs to go burry himself in the hole he crawled out of. As for Red and Gavin, they really need to make it a habit to talk out their feelings. Too many misunderstandings keep occuring and Red's low self esteem isn't helping.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
That bitch!

Can't stand girls like Cassie. She's so manipulative and just can't let people be happy when she isn't. And getting Wilson involved? That's cruel. How can you do that to someone who used to be your best friend? I hope Red and Gavin learn to trust each other soon and to really express how they're feeling because they're going to need each other when the shit hits the fan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
This bitch...ugh

you should make thenm fught and have red totally kick the shit out of her. i cant stand bitches like that!! please dont something little come between red and gavin they're finally finding their way!! im so happy

mrskelleymrskelleyover 15 years ago
Wonderful update!!!!!

Please let Red bring a beat down on Cassie!!!! Loving her and Gavin!!! More please!!!!

nerd4musicnerd4musicover 15 years ago
Distraction...how appropriate.

Chica, let me just say...you are bomb.com. Here I am, supposed to be working on a story of my own and I stumble across this little gem. Needless to say my work lay forgotten as this sucked me in. You are amazing, blending humor and steamy sex in a combination that is endearing and hot at the same time. Red is such a real character, from her almost bordering on irritating self doubt to her feisty personality. And Lord help me, I've been best buds with many a Gavin. Now that I'm all caught up, I can't wait to see how this unfolds. Well done.

honeyrider1517honeyrider1517over 15 years ago
Red the Tomboy

I'm predicting that violent streak Red's complaining that she has, will be coming out very soon when she had kick Cassie's ass. Why can't some women get the picture, their not wanted. Move on. Great job.

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69over 15 years ago
Loved it!

You=awesome=amazing. I check daily for updates on this story. Thanks for the great read!

C_girl225C_girl225over 15 years ago
cool

this story is very good. i like it alot. i think it has some real life twist and turns. i hope cassie and wilson or whatever there names leave them alone so they can actually try to be a couple. hope for more soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I love this story i do

but shes getting annoying shes always jumping to conclusions and overreacting and when someone calls her on it ie when he called her a bitch she has the nerve to be shocked. i say this as a compliment to your writing since only a good writer can make me feel emotions about a story as if it were really happening your amazing but shes still annoying lol

london101london101over 11 years ago
oh Damn...

it's about to go down. lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I like your writing

But some things don't really make sense.

Also she works in the medical field, and yet she isn't smart nough to get the morning after pill? can you say dumb bitch lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A little bit frustrated

Please stop the back and forth between Isabelle and Gavin, and the stupid screaming match between the 2, it is childish and immature. And please stop with the endless self-doubt and insecurities with Isabelle, it is really getting annoying. Like she is a 16 years old and not a 20 something. And also why didn't she take that godammed morning after pill?? Like she is scaring about it, she works in a fucking hospital, but she doesn't do anything?!!! And then she touches her stomach like she wants to be pregnant?!! Really?? It such a cliché: why does every female lead have to be pregnant to be validated or committed with their lover?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
town of the deranged

is everyone in this town fucked up? These people should not be able to breed and spread their immature stupidity

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