All Comments on 'Divination and Manipulation'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

oh please could you continue this story. i loved this . this has heaps of potential .don't worry this was great.thanks ( hoping for more !! ).i can only dream my transition could be this quick ~ oh well back to real life. thanks for this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
amazing!

perfect combination of fantasy and modernism- and so so hot!!!! MORE, PLEASE

tncd26tncd26over 6 years ago
New favorite

God I loved this story. It is amazing. I loved the magical part was subtle and very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent

Amazing story! Would love to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please!

This is legit my favorite story I’ve read lately, please continue!

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago

I really think you need to return to this world and write more. I love a good urban fantasy and I'd like to learn more about the magic system you've developed for this world. And more sexy adventures, natch. I also liked that the people involved were nice, normal people and not evil.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

More please. This one was really written good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hmmm, I knew there was a reasonable explanation of why I changed so effortlessly.

My mage was my high school swim coach. I fell under his spell so effortlessly and completely. Now I know it was magic. Brandi.

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