All Comments on 'Divinity'

"orgasm"

Spellcheck is your friend. :)

This is a great start. I want to know more about this world you have developed. There are so many ways this can go. I want to read about all of them. THANK YOU for this introduction.

Really enjoyed this one and I hope there is another part coming.

Nice buildup and good character introduction. Definitely following 😃

I hope you have more chapters underway.

I hope this will be continued. You had a good start and I hope you continue to build up your characters and the world around them.

Excellent beginning. I have to wonder if maybe you're a fan of Rick Riordan. I'm not complaining, mind you, but this almost feels like a sexy rip off of his stuff.