by WFEATHER
I thought this story had better pacing and more to say than maybe ninety per cent of the stories - make that ninety five - that appear here. The previous poster wanted something - stroke I guess, or straight, but why read this author's work if one is consistently unhappy with it?
Certainly more believable than a lot of stories found here!
....very good, like many of this eclectic author's stories.-pistolpackinpete
I enjoy the story and I appreciate how realistic it is, but I do wish for more detail of the encounter at the end.