All Comments on 'DJ Pt. 23'

Thanks again for another great episode hope jamal's family will accept him.

First let me make it clear how much I enjoy reading this story. It’s well written and has a good plot development.

However if I have a criticism it is that there are probably too many characters and this causes you to lose the opportunity of developing them more fully. To take one example you created the transgender Matt. After an initial start you have stopped writing about him even though his issues deserved more exploration. Certainly I should prefer it if there were less characters developed more fully rather than lots of peripheral ones. Having said which you are the author.

And please carry on writing, you are really good.

Part 24 promises to be fun

In Part 24

Too many boys, too little bathroom

Jamal wants DJ’s and Jamie’s friendship

Matt (F2M Trans) considers dating a girl

Aggie moves into her new residence

Phil and Bryan meet DJ’s naked Dad’s

DJ lets Phil & Bryan use his bed to fuck