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Click hereUsually, it is the boy going to meet the girl's parents. Here, it was the boy going to meet and gain the approval of his new stepsister; I remembered my mother's description. A very pleasant girl! Not pretty, not attractive, so I did not know what to expect.
David introduced us. We were the same age. She was tall, slim with short auburn hair. She offered me her hand and smiled a welcome. Our fingers touched. Her eyes widened, the heavens cracked and the earth moved as we both felt the charge we exchanged. I knew, as we both knew, with absolute certainty, that our lives had forever changed.
Eons passed! I sensed rather than heard my mother's voice.
"Sorry Bess." I asked. " Did you say something?"
She laughed out loud.
"I said that you can eat your supper while standing if that is your preference, but if you can bear to loose her hand and sit down, I think you will be more comfortable."
- COMMENTS
alo0ozabout 4 years agoHaving sex with relattive and then loving someone else feels very cheqp to me.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThen with too many players it turned into a cheap literotica fuck fest. 2 stars...
auhunter04over 7 years agoI think you should have brought step sis into picture sooner and had relations build between them
But hey it is your story you tell it your way
Anonymousover 7 years agoYes, very disappointing ending.
After wonderful loving moments between mother and son... nothing.
A let down. As if nothing important had happened.
Too bad..
Anonymousover 8 years agoI've been reading stories here for years now. Entertaining for sure, but not normally memorable. This however, is most memorable. Totally well done beginning to (sadly) the end. Wonderful pace, marvelous descriptions, almost believable characters. As Billy Crystal once purred, "Mahvalus darling, simply mahvalus". I truly thank you for the time and imagination. BRAVO!!!!
ansdguyover 12 years agoI would have given the story 5 stars, but in the end I felt like I was left wanting. IMHO, there needs to be one more chapter. Great story though.
digdaddyrichalmost 15 years agoI would like to have read about Eve and how he seduced her.How he made the poor girl sore with all of the cock he put to her,and how she became to love him with all of the passion she had. In time it was disclosed that her and her father also had a special relationship as Bess and Ric has. It seems that Bess just couldn't give up that cock of Ric's and kept on fucking even after she was married......Great story and very believable.Thanks ............Rich
Anonymousabout 17 years agoJust great! Of all the stories read at literotica, this was the best.
The style of keeping audiance thinking "What would happen next?", and there by exiting their immagination is marvelleous.
Please don't give a sequal. That would spoil the end.
Would definatly like to enjoy more works, from you.
Keep writing. May God bless your pen. Amen.
Anonymousover 18 years agoYour story has a ring of truth I once was a maintenance man in a condo with many middle aged women
EZtouchalmost 19 years agoGood story but would have been much more pleasurable with a more natural use of language. The reading approached tedium by the end of the story.
