All Comments on 'Do Not Judge a Book By its Cover'

The story was so good love to see the confidence vs nervous roles switch. Hope you write a series with this cause I would clove to read more of these two

I need more if this story!!

The first person perspective is not the easiest to write a good story and yours reads well. Well done...

This is so hot.

but you left me hanging.

Please tell us some more

Could Andrew have just a dusting of sexy blonde hair for that muscular chest? Maybe hair abs too?

Mike knew who Andrew was - he mentioned him by name (and alluded to his BMOC reputation). Mike clearly is interested and is likely either playing hard to get to make Andrew crave him more, or was overwhelmed by being with a stud he may have fantasized about and needed to leave to compose himself. Either way these two need to reconnect. Andrew is clearly gay and his hard dick issues are over! His nervousness and anxiety over Mike is cute.

I blew my load before I could finish the story. It just reminded me so much of how I got broke in while a Sr in high school but it was kinda the opposite! He was a football player and I just ran into him and his teammates at a party. I was clueless about sex and never thought about guys but he seduced me big time! First time and we did everything in the shed in the backyard lol No lube but I took his 7in dick and he bred me. Hit me up sometime brotha. Mastevens001 yahoo

Thx

Really enjoyed it. I think there are many chapters to be written. Look forward to your creative efforts. Mike is very interesting, as well as, Andrew.

Great story well told, thanks.

Great story, well-written with original-sounding characters -- and hot! Hope there's another chapter!

I’d suggest learning how to use apostrophes, otherwise your writing comes off robotic. I’m, I’ll, We’d, We’ll, We’ve, He’d, etc. It’ll make your dialogue flow better and not be so choppy.

Also, slim down your sayings. Normal dialogue isn’t so formal, say “Thanks” instead of “Thank you” or “Don’t” instead of “do not do that”, things like that will make it read better.

It felt like a genuine coming out to yourself story. Good job!

OMG!! Oh my fuckin Christ! It was like I was actually there - I could see everything....like a god damn movie!!! Talk about cock tease...I'm in agony...where the Hell is one more [at least] next chapter.tc Needs a proper ending.