by John_Vandermeer
5! Masterpiece. You have a great talent. You describe the Domme girl excellently.
And in episode 5 the equivalence "my Domme=my Mom" -- bravo.
But why do you consider this the FINAL chapter? Life goes on! Your readers need more episodes, even in the form of prequels, midquels, what else happened after the beach volleyball, who masturbated to the pictures of the pinup with the cannons, whether any of "real men" who seek safety in motors or guns then tried to meet her again and she got accompanied by the "Sugar Daddy"...
I understand that this ending is very artistic but ... Don't abandon your readers! We need more adventures of the Reluctant Domme!